Thread: Spiritual Twain, Mark: The War Prayer v2 15 August 2008
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Old 08-15-2008, 07:40 AM   #1
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Twain, Mark: The War Prayer v2 15 August 2008
This is the second version, with headings centered with more space below, some hyphens changed to mdashes, and a typo fixed.

I'd appreciate more comments about its style and readability.

Regards, Alex

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