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Originally Posted by GeoffC
you obviously spent a lotta time on that, it's wonderful...
as to the goof, well all i can say is that it's (to me) not immediately obvious,
but I have a couple of possibles :
number of digits on the hand...
belt on the sailor to the left looks a little "square" to its waist...
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Everyone knows that mice only have four fingers. I mean ... really.
You are correct about the belt ... I could never get that the way I liked it, but that's not the goof.
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Originally Posted by stxopher
Well, it's obvious, isn't it? The sailor in the back is wearing a shirt made of nylon when everyone knows they really only wear cotton (or other natural fibers) when dressing.
Make that two errors. From the placement of the subjects it's almost impossible to see that the parrot is holding a knife and is about to take out the captain before he can reach the pistol (the signal being when the "Macarena" stops playing).
Orrrrr, I could be completely clueless. Let's go with the clueless option, shall we?
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Clueless would be good.
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Originally Posted by nekokami
Beautiful image! I don't know which "error" you're talking about, though I'm having a bit of trouble parsing what the captain's left hand is doing. 
I can always think of things I'd improve or change about the pages of the manga, but I sort of see it as a work in progress, so I just keep going. The illustration style itself tends to be less fussy than the photorealistic style you were working in, I think. (Lighting, in particular, is a lot easier.) |
Agreed ...
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Originally Posted by GeoffC
by eck these suspenders are killing me ......
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Originally Posted by nekokami
Oh, WELL!
Yeah, I'm kinda wondering, too.  |
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Originally Posted by acidzebra
Did you re-upload the images? They look better now. Or my eyes are more/less tired than the first time I looked.
Also, I've been reading too much original manga lately, I keep trying to read your comic from right-to-left!
As for "Hall of the Pirate King", the only think I can spot offhand is some of the lighting and shadows seems a bit out of whack. For the rest it looks great.
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No, I'm satisfied with the shadows ... those are properly generated based on the lighting as a whole.
Are we all ready for the big reveal??? One of the chair legs (visible under the table and closest to the viewer) has upholstry on it. It's supposed to be wood ... the model didn't map quite right. I need to go back in ... remap the chairs and then do what they call a "plop" render to correct it.
And .... I may take on fighting with the first mate's belt again. We'll see.