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Old 08-11-2008, 07:08 PM   #437
Steven Lyle Jordan
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Originally Posted by axel77 View Post
So this is the way a story looks tomorrow?
Maybe if the writer is particularly bad...

Seriously, though I said that the product placement idea has to be adjusted to fit the realities of literature. So, no, it won't read like that! Maybe more like this:

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The guy chasing me was persistant, I'd give him that. But as I was in my Outback, and he was driving a Hummer, I knew that I'd be able to out-maneuver and out-distance him easily. At one point, I executed a quick left that almost flipped him over, giving me time to take a hit from my 7-Up before he recovered, and I was back on the gas.
Not so painful, eh?
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