Thread: Free/Bargain Suspense/Mystery/Thriller November 2012
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Old 11-22-2012, 07:42 AM   #111
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Originally Posted by caleb72 View Post
Aren't you sick of reading this?



It's a clause that probably worked pretty well once or twice. But now....

It's shows a reliance upon the use of cliches, and may carry over into the novel.



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