Thread: Good, bad or ugly book blurb?
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Old 10-23-2012, 06:06 PM   #2
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I like it, especially the first-person-ness of it. Not sure if the question marks go with the "yeah" phrases. And there should be some better-sounding slang for "pathetic." Might be more amusing to end with "... or I'll take your wallet."
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