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Originally Posted by frozennorth
Same here when I click on add to cart.
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Their loss then. *gets the Smashwords version*
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Originally Posted by Blossom
 I've never heard of it spelled that way. Well what do you know it would of make more sense to use a k instead of a p seeing it's a better known spelling.  |
Using a k makes more sense to me as well, but I've sen the p version before as well. I think it's a regional thing, or possibly a difference between continents.
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Originally Posted by Blossom
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It's growing on me though it's nothing special. I'm on Chapter nine and slowly warming up to them but I think the writer just isn't good at writing chemistry and love scenes like she used the word agitated to describe the heroine getting frisky in her lover's arms. The love scenes are not well done. They need more work but it has gotten better if I can ignore the that part. |
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Whoa. Yeah, not a good word choice there. If I ever found myself "agitated" in a man's arms, said man would be about to start hurting, and there will be bruises and possibly blood if those arms don't move very quickly...
Let's just say I have strong opinions about the importance of asking for permission before touching.
I have noticed something similar in the many romances I've read lately (long story)... writing chemistry of any kind is difficult, and sexual chemistry most of all. Far too many love/sex scenes feel contrived, and sometimes it seems obvious that they are simply mandatory sequences that have been forced in by an editor or desperate writer, rather than something that developed naturally between the people involved due to chemistry or circumstances.