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Old 08-01-2012, 08:24 PM   #3
Heartsong
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You should have read it before I did some editing. I wanted to let the author see that he needs lots of help with what he's initially written to even let it flow and not be repeating himself. It didn't grab my attention either.

We all would like to think what we are writing will hit the New York Times Best Seller List. This is not my book and I have no idea who the author is since I lost the thread.

While I've loved to write since I was very young, I leave that to others whose imagination far out-distances mine.

Thanks for your post....
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