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Old 07-30-2012, 11:52 AM   #106
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Originally Posted by HarryT View Post
because in both cases they were long passages of dialogue where it just so happened that the text still made sense even with the pages omitted.
1. How did you manage to catch it?

2. If it still made sense with two page removed, sounds like the author could have done a bit more editing!

(kidding...I'm sure every word was a work of art. )
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