MY name is MJ Caan and I am nearly finished with my first novel, Earth's First. It is a superhero thriller novel, that focuses on the characters as well as the action. Not for children if I must say so myself. I would love for anyone with interest in that genre to just take a look at the first few pages of the book and see what they think. I am dying for some creative criticism. I'll include the link below. Again, thanks for any help.
M.J. Caan
http://mjcaan.tumblr.com/post/27088893033/earthsfirst