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Originally Posted by kezzym
as i have said i am a total novice i have been writing for years but i have only ever done it for fun and personal enjoyment just wanted to know what ppl thought about my stories really i welcome any type of comments but as i am totally new to this just a bit of advice would be nice but i understand what your saying so thanks anyway guess ill just stick to writing for fun
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You have just reinforced what I said to you.
In this response you did not use any punctuation at all. You wrote seventy-seven words as one sentence. You did not use uppercase for "I". You wrote your, instead of you're. You missed a word in front of "just wanted to know..." You wrote "ill" instead of I'll.
You might be capable of success as a writer in the sense that two things are required, and you possibly have one of them. The two things are the ability to tell an interesting story, and the ability to express that story in a way that a reader will find easy to read and understand. You write in a manner that is not easy to understand, your writing intrudes into your story. It jars the reader, it breaks focus, it detracts from the thread of the story.
Some time spent in learning to write well might make all the difference.