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Old 06-25-2012, 06:16 PM   #106
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Originally Posted by Joykins View Post
Those are all amateurish pacing errors. Very frustrating to read. I see them sometimes in self-published stuff even if the grammar and spelling has been cleaned up.

Is this _Tyler_ by the way? From the description it sounded like it would be either very good or completely horrible, with no in-between.
Yep that's the book. The thing is the Author's past self published stuff didn't have these problems nor does her Second one of the series Dylan from what I can tell so far but something happened with Tyler. The editor didn't do a good job at catching these simple mistakes or the wrong copy was sent to print.
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