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Originally Posted by Blossom
It's okay I understand. 
The problem is that the book has suppose to been professionally edited and believe me when I say it's a mess. Words like The and And are missing and the character actions are hardly describe in some places. One minute they are laying down then the next they are against the wall. How did that happened? That's just one example.
What really irked me was the restaurant scene. They go in and sit down, ordered drinks then talk to waitress who is the owner and it's never mention they eat or drink. They then get up and leave after a conversation between themselves.  I don't even think it mentioned them paying. It's really hard to follow. It like the scenes mash in together. Some chapters are okay and you start to get into the book only to reach a place where it happens again and you're left scratching your head. It's almost like they published the rough draft by mistake but they did do a spell check for it. |
Those are all amateurish pacing errors. Very frustrating to read. I see them sometimes in self-published stuff even if the grammar and spelling has been cleaned up.
Is this _Tyler_ by the way? From the description it sounded like it would be either very good or completely horrible, with no in-between.