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Old 05-31-2012, 11:21 AM   #16
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Originally Posted by K. Molen View Post
A story with an omniscient 3rd person unreliable narrator that doesn't outright lie to the reader.
Third person, present tense would cover you. Don't chance any kind of "narrator" or insight, just show everything the characters do, thereby leaving the clues in their actions. No deceit necessary.

I love unreliable narrators, being one, but I think it would confuse matters here where all you're really doing is setting up a twist.

A disembodied unreliable narrator makes no sense to me.
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