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I swore I wouldn't read it because it would be unlikely I'd like Twilight fanfiction, but after a trillion people told me how wonderful it was I borrowed it from the library. I read the first few pages and it seemed poorly written and poorly edited. The author in an odd place described the main character's father in a way that felt disjointed to me, and then just a little further in the book, the main character described her father to the guy in it. Why twice? That drove me absolutely crazy and I had to stop reading.
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