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Originally Posted by faithbw
I have to give it up to those of you who even made it to the sex scenes. I did not. I think I read three chapters before giving up on 50 Shades. The writing was terrible! I felt brain cells dying every time I read the book.
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I agree the writing isn't that great but for me it was the repetitiveness of the words and character actions that got on my last nerve. I'll never understand why it's so popular. *shakes head*
I just finished Knight by Kristen Ashley which was said to be like 50 Shades. Now there's a book I wasted money on. It is the worse book I have read and I thought 50 Shades was bad. This one the writing is so bad you will have no clue what the hero is saying. It's like he is a Sim and talking Simish to me. The dialogue is mostly I guess supposedly street talk but it came across to me as gibberish. I wont be buying anymore indie books because this book is the perfect example why we need professional editing. After reading Knight, 50 Shades actually looks really good to me.
