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Old 05-11-2012, 01:41 PM   #42
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I like first person narratives, but..it will turn me off if the writer makes it a branding step by step - self absorbed commercial. lol "I put on my nike Xpensive Jordans and headed out the door to Starbucks for my macchiato, my rolex was saying it was 6:00 am blah blah blah" lol
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