Thread: Rojuun, Book 1 of the Willden Trilogy - John H. Carroll
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Old 04-26-2012, 10:33 AM   #14
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I've done a new edit of "Rojuun". In it, I've removed 12,000 words of unnecessary wordage, removed a number of adverbs, cleaned up some grammar and missing punctuation.

No actual story content has been changed and you probably won't notice a difference other than the fact that it reads a little smoother.

The new version is available on Smashwords and Amazon, but it hasn't been distributed elsewhere yet.

Smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/31154
Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B004TXS0DI
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