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Old 04-25-2012, 01:13 PM   #160
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Also, to chime in on the passive voice. I believe passive voice has its place, but I also believe that it's overuse (which is far too common) removes the immediacy from your writing. I find excessive passive voice one of the most irritating stylistic choices ever. And I am also an old fogey (at least of the half century variety).
Agreed, it can be overused, but it very much has its place in, for example, writing paragraphs of description. If you're describing a scene, and there's no character immediately involved, then writing it in the passive voice is a very natural choice.
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