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Old 04-25-2012, 08:28 AM   #14
Steven Lyle Jordan
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Originally Posted by mr ploppy View Post
Ah, I knew I shouldn't have used Steven Lyle as a model...
So here I am, planning to just look at but not comment on a cover that I didn't think particularly worked... and someone has to get snide.

So...

Sorry, but the photo doesn't look like a biker; the over-the-top grimace makes him look like a retarded (or hopelessly drunk/high) homicidal maniac who eats bikers for breakfast (or gets beat up by them). It's also a bit close on him. Full head and shoulders, with a sneering look, would be much better. Better still, pull back some more and show either the bike he's sitting on, or the townspeople he's threatening.

Finally, if you want a retro look, tone down all the colors... wash them out, as if you just found this cover amongst the 60s remainders.

Done.

I'm going back to posing now.
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