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Originally Posted by fedrich519
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Basic punctuation & other errors on the first page don't inspire me to keep reading. Authors who don't know how to punctuate dialogue need to hire editors.
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“Good morning, sir” the A.I. sprang to life and spoke in a male, British voice.
“What do you have for me this morning?”
“No relevant messages received during the night. Your first vidconference is at 9 o’clock with Director Mills, when I contacted him last night to confirm the meeting; he indicated to me that he will be reporting on the recovery progress at the Atlanta factory.”
“Did he sound positive about it or like he wasn’t looked forward to it?”
“Based on his vocal patterns and word choices, I would say he his report will be positive.”
“Or complete bullshit” Howard muttered.
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