Thread: How much violence can you have in a romance?
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Old 04-09-2012, 04:32 PM   #16
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Originally Posted by RobynJane View Post

Violence in a romance? Hmm...does it add to the story? Does it make sense? Or is it just gratuitous (there simply for the sake of violence)? Or is it a necessary part of the plot? Again, that's something only you, the author, can decide.

Robyn Jane.
It leads into a shag in the toilets, so I would say it was necessary. So it's more a case of how detailed it is.
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