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Originally Posted by mr ploppy
I'm guessing you can't have pages and pages of carnage with teeth and blood flying everywhere, but is something like "he stood back and watched her stick the boot in, welling up with pride" acceptable in these sort of things? Or picking up a broken bottle and ramming it in someone's face, without going into any further details?
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I think your description was far too graphic for a romance novel. I would have thought that something like "he stood back and watched her give him a Yorkshire kiss, welling up with pride and lust as she took the top of his head off with a pair of rusty garden shears." I think gardening is so essential in a romance novel don't you?
