Huh, I don't see any format issue (I do see 3nd person present tense with a shifting POV, which I hate, hate, hate).
Oh, unless you mean the extra line spacing between paragraphs?
One of the books I picked up for Kindle that has odd formatting issues is a Julia Spencer-Fleming book
Fountain of Blood. (Recommended by someone here on Mobileread, I think.) I'd read that this is a Topaz format book, and that's the problem, but it's an ugly, cramped, crabbed format job, both in character kerning and line kerning, and it often drops words down into the line below.