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Ana,
I went to the website. No real issues came up for me there. Then I went to Amazon. I'd recommend setting up an Amazon Author profile through Author Central. Then I'd recommend posting a headshot: both on the website and on your Amazon Author profile. If we're going to spend several hundred pages reading your book, we want to see you. I know some will disagree with this but this is an opinion.
The way the book is set-up, there is a lot of material to work through before we get to the writing sample. You can create the ebook file to start right at the beginning or a couple pages above.
Regarding the product description of Pulchritude, the first couple sentences are a little difficult to get through because they are packed with so much information. This information could be rewritten to be spread over maybe three or four sentences.
You could also add a few tags to your amazon page to help potential readers find your stuff.
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