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Old 03-07-2012, 10:21 PM   #1
AriCarruthers
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I recently wrote a short story (only about 4000 words) and I would like some feedback on it. I have been writing for several years now but have only received critique from friends or family. Although they are all very critical and made some helpful suggestions, I know they are biased to some degree.

If one person says he or she would be willing to take the time to read my story, I will gladly post it!

Thanks in advance for any critiques or opinions!

-Ariel
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