The terms weren't wrong, it's that he crams so many into virtually every sentence. It strikes me as some guy writing the story with the intention of cramming so much jargon in that it sounds real, when it just comes off as forced.
And I mean, people that call their baby "2.0" and say stuff like "he just core dumped"? Ugh, I just wanted to endlessly slam those characters heads into a car door.
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