One of the most famous examples of stream of consciousness is in Faulkner's "The Sound and the Fury."
Another notable example is in Virginia Woolfe's "Mrs. Dalloway."
Regarding an example of this method in genre fiction (sci-fi), you might wish to look at Delany's "Dhalgren."
Without trying to lecture, one must ask, "Is there a reason to have a section (or the whole piece), reflect storytelling that utilizes this narrative technique?"
Happy pecking. (If you're not a touch typist.)



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