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Originally Posted by mr ploppy
It's actually quite a grim story, but I'm aiming for a sort of 1970s style violent pulp fiction blurb for it. (Which is basically what it is). Another line to add in there somewhere is this:
Don't let your granny read this -- unless your granny is a biker bitch from hell.
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I'd also suggest that you work the word biker in there, as calling her the Momma of hard men just makes her sound like Ma Barker.
"They were hard-living bikers. She was their Momma..." or similar?
But I like the concise style of blurb better than the longer ones.
I'm being objective here, as neither outlaw bikers as heros (or anti-heros or any kind of non-villian), nor zombies ('Sons of Anarchy' meets 'Dawn of the Dead'?) personally appeal to me.