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Having a hard time from the blurb knowing what the book is about...
The first one has no one/thing to connect with, while the second makes it sound like Lynn is a heroine who you will follow as she deals with bikers and has to rescue/find her son.
If that is not your story, then the second one does not work.
Does the book follow one main character? If it does, perhaps try writing what he/she/it thinks the story is.
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