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Old 12-11-2011, 09:42 PM   #5
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I looked it up online, and some places said that if the dialogue is too long to break it up by momentarily diverting the attention to another character, then back to the speech. Another site just said to break it up with action, to remind your readers that the characters are 'physical human beings'.

Really, I'm being too lazy to pull out my textbooks and look this up, so the internet search. LOL
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