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Old 05-21-2008, 08:26 PM   #163
Taylor514ce
Actively passive.
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My attempt:

2. leaper
4. and her catcher
6. interlace, separate --
8. their gestures a history, a
2. ballet

Not literal, but going after more of the flavor and trying to keep it a cinquain.

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