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Old 05-21-2008, 08:22 PM   #162
zelda_pinwheel
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are they called catcher and flyer ? those are the words i didn't know, and i couldn't find good equivalents in the dictionary... yours seems like a good translation, with just one or two changes :


Catcher
and flyer
intertwine, separate
a whole story in their ballet
of motion.


but the last line is still not quite right. it's not an easy poem in english.
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