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Old 05-21-2008, 08:13 PM   #161
montsnmags
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Originally Posted by zelda_pinwheel View Post
that might be the sequel...
Okay, okay...

Going for something reasonably literal (that is, with a fish in my ear - more just words than poetry), I would say...

Catcher
and flyer
intertwine and separate
a whole history in their ballet
gestures



Cheers,
Marc
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