Thread: Putting Dialogue in a story.
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Old 12-10-2011, 06:11 PM   #5
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I believe you're supposed to have 2 lines in between scenes too for the same reason. Otherwise one minute the reader is on board your spaceship for example and the next thing they're learning that they are on a planet without any warning.
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