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Old 05-21-2008, 11:17 AM   #58
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I like seeing my poorly chosen my words and my recorded struggle to find a better. It's instructive to me. I also like seeing my commentary on what I write, such as "cliche" or "remove made-up impressions".

I use my notebook as a workbook, and I force myself to "show my work", which is why I like using a pen.
I like that idea and I have particularly enjoyed reading Whitman's first notebook to see how he worked out his thoughts. But I seem to be too self-conscious to do it myself. So, like Patricia, I erase more than an I cross out. And I have once or twice even torn out pages that I really hated. Yes, I've broken that rule.

Propelling pencil. I hadn't heard that British term before but it makes more sense, as usual, than our mechanical pencil. But I instantly thought of a pencil with a beanie. Or something like this (EDIT: actually, this looks like a propelled pencil. a propelling pencil would be at the other end. let's not go there.)
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