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Old 11-17-2011, 05:42 AM   #238
Belgarath
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dunkel zur arbeit
und auch dunkel nach hause -
wintermantelzeit!

Anmerkung: ich würde den Elefantenhaiku umstellen und den verstopften Rüssel quasi als Pointe bringen ...

lg,
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