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Old 11-15-2011, 09:32 AM   #9
Steven Lyle Jordan
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When I have my reader hat on, for the most part I do not like it. It is one thing to have a flash back scene or three... another thing entirely for the book to be completely out of order.

As a writer... it could be fun to try and do well!
Yeah, the trick seems to be to do it sparingly, and not to stray from the linear format too much, lest your audience gets lost.

And speaking of Lost ; When they stuck to one person's flashbacks an episode (more or less), it was easy to follow the non-linear flow --and those who watched may remember, a change to and from flashbacks was usually accompanied by a sound, almost like the roar of an incoming wave that cut off abruptly at the change, so you had an audible clue to the switchover. (Really just a replacement for the old "ripple-fade" that TV shows used to use until the ripple itself became a parody.)

The only way to accomplish the separation of two timelines in books that has ever satisfied me has been breaking them up into chapters (as I did in Despite Our Shadows). Using any other separating element (such as the extra line break or "~" within chapters) tends to get confusing, unless it is used for nothing else.
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