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Old 05-13-2008, 05:32 PM   #84
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Yesterday's poem was the first that I have attempted for decades. Here's another (but I don't think it's as good: though it is a computer-related haiku aand has a seasonal reference, plus a refererence to the transience of things):

I see the azure void.
Not cloudless summer sky:
The blue screen of death.
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