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Old 10-30-2011, 04:36 PM   #65
Jadon
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If the author spends three pages describing some weapon, I feel no need to read that. Sex scenes are often similar. When it's clear that something doesn't matter to the plot, why bother? Some authors' minds wander something terrible.
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