Thread: New writer needs help on Fantasy novel (blacksmithing)
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Old 10-21-2011, 03:50 PM   #48
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He squeezed on the bellows to force air into the forge, raising the heat of the coals.
Bellows are pumped (repeatedly squeezed), not just squeezed once. Also, you wouldn't squeeze "on" the bellows, you'd just squeeze them.
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