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Old 10-19-2011, 06:48 AM   #549
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I don't have high (or even low) hopes for the book if this quote from the text is accurate (bolding supplied by me):

Quote:
"A devastating tsunami hit the entire world and left no one breathe but us. We have been gathered together in this care center by the government as we were the only survivors of the last tsunami."
or if the rest of the author's post reflects the quality of the writing; for example:

Quote:
Twenty-five-year-old Ryan Simpson is among the last survivors of a tsunami attack, and live in a care center, built by the government.
and

Quote:
His life completely changed after he meets Woody, one of the care center's occupant. Woody purposely explained to him logically, the whole tsunami-thing was just a malicious government plan to improve their military technology. Woody quietly formed a team to escape from the care center, and he invites Ryan to join them. Ryan caught in between his loyalty to the government, and curiosity to seek about the truth.

Then he meets Angela, another person in Woody's team. She is a tough girl but rather discouraged by surroundings. They decided to run from the care center with the help of Janua, Woody's father, who happened to be one of the army top ranking officers...
If the description's writing reflects the writing in the book, a professional editor is needed.
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