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Old 10-06-2011, 08:44 AM   #28
Steven Lyle Jordan
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On a more serious note (yes, I must): In a sex scene, how well (or badly) the sexual moment works out can color the character's views of each other and impact their interactions in the future. You could just say it afterward ("I thought you were nice... but you just got off on hurting me! Never touch me again!" "I'm sorry, Paul..."), but describing that moment can have more impact.
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