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Old 10-03-2011, 10:33 AM   #18
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Originally Posted by Artisan View Post
1. The "action" takes a VERY long time to get underway. The entire beginning of the book is dedicated to a back-story that is neither interesting or particularly relevant to rest of the story.
That's because it's not an action book. The world building and characters are what drive the story.
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