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Old 10-01-2011, 01:28 AM   #14
crich70
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Another thing to consider I think is 'is the sex good sex or bad sex?' Sometimes bad sex (where things go wrong) might make for more interest than good sex. I mean if the hero and heroine are trying to get together for example and just as they are thinking that they will finally consumate their desires for each other something happens to derail it again then you have more tension in the story. It might keep the reader guessing. Will they get together? If they do then when will it be?
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