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Old 09-27-2011, 07:48 AM   #8
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My advice to writers:

1) Keep the number of seen changes to a minimum
2) Keep a limited number of characters in the foreground (something like two or three) its ok to have a few in the background
3) Describe the characters so that your reader gets to know them;
4) Mix genders (nothing turns me off like a stag novel or one with all women);
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