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PKFFW · 09-09-2011, 06:43 AM

Thanks pdurrant. Here's three errors.....I figure if they've got these then they probably have most if not all of them.

Chapter 29 - 8th paragraph starts with the line "I really wish you'd waited to light that thing until 1 was somewhere else"(numeral 1 instead of I)

Chapter 30 - Begins - The lift doors opened, and Citizen Captain Joanne Hall - known I to friends and family........(grammar "known I to.....)

Chapter 31 - 6th paragraph ends with the line - They were all still busy looking down at the table rather than meet his eyes.(grammar...rather than meet his eyes)

Thanks for taking the time to check it for me, if they have those errors fixed I'll pick it up from webscriptions myself.

Cheers,
PKFFW

09-09-2011, 06:43 AM	#8
PKFFW Wizard Posts: 3,791 Karma: 33500000 Join Date: Dec 2008 Device: BeBook, Sony PRS-T1, Kobo H2O	Thanks pdurrant. Here's three errors.....I figure if they've got these then they probably have most if not all of them. Chapter 29 - 8th paragraph starts with the line "I really wish you'd waited to light that thing until 1 was somewhere else"(numeral 1 instead of I) Chapter 30 - Begins - The lift doors opened, and Citizen Captain Joanne Hall - known I to friends and family........(grammar "known I to.....) Chapter 31 - 6th paragraph ends with the line - They were all still busy looking down at the table rather than meet his eyes.(grammar...rather than meet his eyes) Thanks for taking the time to check it for me, if they have those errors fixed I'll pick it up from webscriptions myself. Cheers, PKFFW