Thanks for the replies, guys. It's nothing to do with the meatgrinder, I found that awesome, in fact better than converting to epub in Calibre... !
It's just after re-reading lots of times, I guess I wasn't seeing any problems. I left it a few days, and saw what I needed to revise. I'm going to put a second revision up at the end of the week, then leave it.
There's nothing that's going to change what's said/written, but just gentle rewording to fix the flow of speech in dialogue or in the descriptions.
It's my first published, and I'm learning to ropes the hard way in a sense. The sequel is already in the works, and the things I've learnt from this first story are being applied to the second.
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