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Old 08-23-2011, 12:52 PM   #16
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Originally Posted by Penforhire View Post
Infodumps are tricky. We all prefer to see details skillfully woven into dialog and action or otherwise distributed in a way to avoid drawing attention to it. Some authors do quite well up to a point and then step over the line. I happened to recently read John Scalzi's Old Man's War trilogy recently. I started off impressed with his weaving and then, at times, it fell on its face.
That's probably a testament to how difficult it can be to interweave description, history, and dialogue.
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