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I guess you are aware of it, but at least the first story has many spurious paragraph breaks, especially noticeable when they occur in the middle of a character speaking. Some of them are easy to catch because an open quote was not closed, but others one has to read them twice.
Since you've been recently updating eBooks, aparently for similar reasons, may I ask you to consider this as the next one to "fix"? I've started reading it and it's a pity there are so many errors.
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