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3) Creating a set of rules for your world, then breaking them because they became hard to follow.
6) Sudden unexplained major shifts in character of the main characters.
- Complicated beginning, to many character or to many things going on at the first 15 pages with on character description.
- Romance being to lovey dovey, Too much discussion about emotions and feeling
- Killing or writing off my favorite character.
-Pointless and incredibly long descriptions.
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